Self Evaluation of the presentation

My power point presentation on my chosen topic did not go down as well as I thought it would as I had sufficient amount of work on my presentation. The main criticism which I received was that each one of my slides contained too much information to take in and I should have spread out my work by making brainstorms etc. I think I would have made a better presentation if I was allowed in the lessons to see other presentations from my peers. Another thing I would like to mention is that I could have done a better job in presenting my work if I was allowed to present it when I actually made it because all the main ideas would have been fresh in my mind but unfortunately I was not allowed in lessons even though I was told to do work outside the class and this is when I made my presentation.